Wednesday, April 23, 2014

WonHundred Word Wednesday - Would You Like Fries with That?

            “Well, well, if it isn’t Millie Dirken.” Lawrence Bosch leaned against the McDonald’s counter and leered at the girl behind it. “What a surprise. I wound up a CEO of a mega corporation, and here you are serving up fast food.”
            Millie smiled at him. It wasn’t hard. The government badge hidden within her McDonald’s employee disguise was an effective shield against his words.
            “Gimme a Big Mac and a large Coke,” ordered Bosch.
            Still wearing her pleasant smile, Millie handed the man a specially laced cup. One sip, and he would be dead.

            “Would you like fries with that?”

♥/Kat!e

Today's Novel Idea Prompted by: "Would you like fries with that?" Courtesy of WonHundred Word Wednesday! Read the other responses: 




10 comments:

Wendy Jo said...

Oooh goosebumps. Love the twist :)

Jaclynweist said...

hahaha Oh that is SO awesome!

AM Woods: alisonmillerwoods.com said...

Loved it! (and now I will hesitate to order drinks at restaurants) :D

Laura D. Bastian said...

wow! wonder what he did to deserve it. And very good twist at the end.

Miranda D Nelson said...

What a great twist! I loved the line about her badge being a shield against his words :)

Jessica Winn said...

Nice! Loved the twist! :)

Lindzee said...

Revenge is a very nice perk of the job. ;)

Kelly Martin said...

OH!!!!!!!!!!!! Very cool!

Ginny-Gin-Gin said...

Love!

Ginny-Gin-Gin said...

Love!