Showing posts with label prompt responses. Show all posts
Showing posts with label prompt responses. Show all posts

Saturday, February 8, 2020

Fiction that is Neither Flash Nor on Friday: A Cup of Tea

            It seemed like the opportunity of a lifetime. When the letter arrived, inviting me to meet with Madam Larosa, I hadn't hesitated for a second. Everyone knew of her power. There was no one better.

            In the taxi, I felt nothing but excitement and pride at the great honor of being singled out. But the moment I saw the house, misgivings crept in. I stepped out of the car, trembling, looking up at the massive building in front of me. It rose three stories, with a tower on the east side, and every inch of it was blacker than devil's magic. The windows were all shuddered so there was no chance to catch a glimpse inside.
            Tentatively, I ascended the black marble stairs and approached the polished black wooden door. A black crescent moon adorned the glowing round doorbell. When I pressed it, a chime like tolling church bells knelled within.
            A pale, pale girl with almost-white hair answered the door. She wore a dress as dark as the house, making her looking ghostly by comparison. There was something apologetic in her posture, and she kept her eyes on the ground.
            "Hello," I said softly, feeling that, if I spoke too loudly, I would scare the girl away. "My name is Lorelei; I have an appointment with Madam Lerosa."
            Nodding, the girl stepped back and let me in. Inside was as dark as out. As I stepped over the threshold, I felt as if I were being swallowed. Deep black wooden floors and black wallpaper, patterned with slightly lighter black flowers, did nothing to make the room warm or inviting. The walls were hung with mirrors that distorted the light from a handful of flickering candles, giving the room an otherworldly feeling.
            The pale girl pointed to a door.
            "Is Madam Larosa in there?"
            She pointed again, so I simply went in.
            The room was shockingly bright, though in any other house it would be considered somber. The furniture was made of black wood, but the upholstery was brown and grey. Golden picture frames hung on the taupe walls, surrounding pictures of stormy seas and crumbling castles. At first, I thought the room was deserted. Then something stirred at the desk and I noticed a small, ancient woman, dressed like a crow. She was as faded as an old photograph, her face indistinct and her hair, though still brown, somehow colorless. The only thing alive about her was her bright amber eyes that watched my every move.
            Curtsying awkwardly, I tried to smile but found I couldn't. My heart trembled within me and I knew without a doubt that I had made a grave mistake in coming here. Those eyes, like an orange moon, sent fear thrilling through every inch of my body.
            "Sit," the woman said, though I didn't see her lips move.
            Sinking down on the stiff brown couch, I watched her as closely as she watched me. Still, nothing moved but her eyes.
            "One lump or two?"
            Somehow, I was holding a teacup I'd never seen before. The tea streamed from a teapot floating at my side. But I didn't want sugar or tea, all I wanted was to get as far away from there as possible. I tried to think of any excuse to escape.
            "None, thank you," I managed to say, though my voice seemed oddly weak and quiet.
            The teapot settled back down on the table. Looking down into my cup, I saw the dark tea swirling, portents flashing across its surface but disappearing before I could comprehend them.
            "You have talent." The voice was low and rumbling, like a cat's purr. "Such talent. But you have wasted it. If only I had gotten to you sooner."
            I blinked in surprise. No one had ever said anything like this to me before. Certainly, I didn't flaunt my power or use it pointlessly, but I had honed my ability. I considered myself well-trained.
            "Ah well," said Madam Larosa, still without moving. She might have been a doll, except for those eyes. "We shall see what we can do."
            "Please," I burst, spilling my tea in my anxiety. The fallen droplets didn't make it to the floor, but held in the air like dark, sparkling rain. "Please," I said again, "I don't think this is right for me. Perhaps I don't have enough talent. I should just go."
            A rich laugh rolled around the room. It didn't seem to be coming from the little woman at the desk. It came instead from the pictures and the fire and the covered windows.
            "Oh, my dear. The choice is not yours to make."
            The door creaked open and the pale girl gestured for me to follow her.
            "She will show you your room. Tomorrow, our work can begin."
            The rumbling laugh echoed behind me as I stepped into the darkness of the hall.



♥/Kat!e

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Monday, February 3, 2020

Flash Fiction Friday: Hitchhiker


            Lost gods are the worst hitchhikers. Technically, as a Lyft driver, I'm not supposed to take non-paying passengers at all, but what can you do? Even the weakest, most pathetic god, stripped of most of his power and forced to rely on mundane methods of transportation can make the life of a demigod like me miserable. Just ask my pal Murphy.
            I pulled over to let the latest wandering deity in. If it wasn't for my own godly heritage, I would have thought he was a wandering artist, nobody special. He looked like a guy who would play soft rock, the kind with heavy social commentary but that's so mellow you hardly notice. A soft black leather jacket hung loosely on his thin frame. His brown hair and beard were curly and greyed with the dust of travel. He wore faded jeans and dark sneakers. It was kind of a surprise that he wasn't lugging a guitar.
            Sliding into the front seat with easy grace, the god gave me a tired but friendly smile. I don't know how I know they're gods, it's just an innate ability. Though everything about this guy said he was ordinary and pleasant, I knew I had to treat him with the utmost respect.
            "Where can I take you?" I asked politely.
            "Just drive," he said.
            This is what I hate about gods. They throw out orders, and I can't do anything but follow them, even though I have no idea where it might lead.
            Pulling back onto the road, I did as I was told.
            "Thank you for stopping for me." His voice was calm, and surprisingly humble. Most gods take it for granted that everyone is eager to do their bidding. And, the more forgotten the god, the more of his shrines have been dismantled and his powers have faded, the more arrogant and demanding he tends to be.
            "Of course," I said, glancing sideways at my passenger.
            He nodded. "Of course. You think I'd strike you down if you didn't."
            What could I say to that? It felt like a threat, even though his tone was friendly. I gave a sort of shrug.
            "I wouldn't hurt you, Brian. You could toss me out here and I wouldn't do anything."
            "Then what do you want?"
            "I want you to not be afraid of me." He sighed softly. "I wish everyone would stop being afraid of me."
            I raised my eyebrows. I was wary of all gods, but nothing about this one seemed particularly frightening.
            "I'm not afraid of you," I assured him.
            "You are," he said, looking out the window at the winding road ahead of us. "You always have been."
            "Who are you?"
            Maybe I was too intent on the conversation, too focused on the calm, melancholy man beside me, but I didn't see the truck. It came skidding around a bend in the road, driving on the wrong side. There was a squeal of collapsing metal, a blaring horn, a burst of fabric as the airbag engulfed me. Pain like I'd never known ripped through every piece of my body. In the senseless confusion, I heard a soft voice beside me answer my question.
            "I am Death."



Read Kira's response here.

♥/Kat!e

Friday, January 24, 2020

Flash Fiction Friday: Assassin

            "It's too early in the day for killing princes," Havar grumbled as he fitted a bolt into his crossbow.
            "I know," the crossbow said in its soothing, matronly voice.
            Staring up at the tree that would be his perch, Havar heaved a long sigh before hauling his old bones up into its branches. "I should never get up for anything less than a king."
            "Times are tough," the crossbow said. "We have to take what we can get."
            Still grumbling, Havar stretched out on his stomach high above the ground and aimed the crossbow at the path, trying to stay alert. This was getting harder of late. His mind wandered over previous days he'd spent in similar positions, sometimes waiting hours for his target. He'd never missed a shot, though he was sure the crossbow had more to do with that than his own talent.
            "You remember that king we killed back in Uldava?" he murmured. "Took us six weeks of scouting. I never thought we'd get him away from his guards."
            "That's the job that put you on the map," the crossbow said fondly.
            "It was a long time ago." Havar sighed again and shifted uncomfortably on his perch. "Wish this blasted boy would show up. I should be in bed."
            "Are you waiting for me?"
            Startled out of his wits, Havar barely managed to cling to the tree branch. He twisted his neck to see a boy of about twelve standing behind him, on the ground. The boy's bright blue eyes were friendly, his freckled face tipped back to stare up at Havar.
            "You're not a very good assassin," the boy said, swinging himself up onto the lowest branch of the tree. "I could hear you talking. 'Course, if I'd ridden down the path like you expected, I'd probably be dead now, wouldn't I?"
            "Why didn't you?" Havar demanded, having managed to slow his racing heart. "My intelligence told me you ride it every morning."
            "Oh, I've got a good luck thing," the prince said with a shrug. "Fairies blessed me at my birth, you know. It's a real nuisance for everybody who's trying to kill me."
            "It's not going to protect him from being shot point-blank," the crossbow said, seeming to wriggle in Havar's hand. It was eager for blood.
            "I'll get to that," Havar told it. "You don't seem very concerned about people trying to kill you," he said to the boy.
            "Well, they're not doing a very good job. Where'd you get a talking crossbow?"
            Sitting up and rubbing his aching back, Havar smiled. "I got it from a goblin who didn't know how to handle it."
            "Nasty, rough fingers he had," the crossbow remembered.
            "He had me pinned down, but none of his shots would fly straight. I managed to pick up one of the bolts that missed me and jam it down his throat."
            "Cool!" said the boy, leaning back against the trunk of the tree.
            "We've had lots more exciting adventures since then." Havar ran an age-worn hand across the smooth wood of the crossbow. "And lots more exciting than shooting a young boy."
            "You're not backing out now," the crossbow said sternly.
            Looking down, Havar studied the pale, round face of the child he'd been sent to assassinate. "Who's trying to kill you, boy?"
            "Oh, a lot of people. My sister, mainly. But there's a king in Perrin who's tried a few times, too. Don't you know who hired you?"
            "My clients prefer anonymity." Squinting down at the boy, Havar thought for a long moment. "You're blessed with luck, you say?"
            "Yup. That's why I'm still alive."
            Havar nodded. "Good. We'll need that."
            "What for?"
            "I'm not going to kill you."
            "What?" cried the crossbow.
            "I'm going to help you stop the attempts. Now, move. I'm coming down."

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This isn't really a "flash" fiction, since it's rather long and obviously just the beginning of a story... It's been a long time since I've written anything, so I'm just happy I got this out. Thanks to Kira for getting me to do it! You can read her response to this prompt here

♥/Kat!e

Saturday, June 20, 2015

Flash Fiction Friday: Demolition


            “Look, lady, it’s not my idea to destroy them. But it’s my 
job to get it done. So get out of the way.”
            “Please!” She clasps her hands. “I’ve worked so hard on it! I’ll get more money.”
            “Can you get it in the next five minutes?”
            “Well, no, but-”
            “Then move. It’s coming down.”
            It’s beautiful, but then they always are. Its crystal spires sparkle towards the heavens. She must have poured months into it.
            And now I have to use my power to tear down her Dream Castle because the money has run out.
            I hate my job.


♥/Kat!e

Today's Novel Idea Prompted by: "It wasn't my idea to destroy it. But it was my job to get it done."

Friday, April 17, 2015

Flash Fiction Friday: Excuses

            “I have to go... iron... my cat.” I winced, unable to believe that I’d just said those words.
            He arched a perfect dark eyebrow in classic romance novel fashion. “I see. Well, I’d hate to keep you from something so important.”
            “I’m sorry. I’m not good at this.”
             “It’s alright. I understand. I won’t bother you again.”
            He walked away and I let him go. I had to. Nothing could interfere with my mission.

            But as I set off to find the landlocked mermaid, I wished that I could have just one ordinary Friday night.

♥/Kat!e

Today's Novel Idea Prompted by: "I have to go... iron... my cat."

Friday, March 27, 2015

Flash Fiction Friday - Death Date

            “I think I’ve been dead since ’98.” Marianne stirs her smoothie with her lips scrunched to one side.
            “Can’t you keep anything straight?” Karlie asks over her coffee mug. “It was ’99. I remember you complaining about just missing the millennium.”
            “It doesn’t matter anyways,” says Max, “Y’all know I died in the eighties.”
            “But Richard died in ’76.”
            “Richard doesn’t count. I’m the oldest in the group.”
            “I think youngest should decide where we haunt next.” Hayley grins, licking her ice cream cone.

            “Hasn’t even been dead a week, and already she wants to boss us around,” Karlie complains.


♥/Kat!e

Today's Novel Idea Prompted by: "I think I've been dead since '98."

Friday, March 20, 2015

Flash Fiction Friday: The Butterflies

            “Please,” Shelly clutched my arm, “Help him.” She gestured to the door off the lab.
            I went through and caught my breath. The hallway was filled with hundreds of butterflies, nestling on the walls. It took me a few minutes to find the scientist; he was covered in butterflies, too. But I could see his eyes. Haunted. Streaming tears.
            “It’s beautiful,” he whispered.
            “It is.” I knelt before him. “Doctor Richards, will you come with me for a little while?”
            “They told me about where they come from.” His shoulders shook, dislodging a few butterflies. “I want to go there.”


♥/Kat!e

Today's Novel Idea Prompted by: "The hallway was filled with hundreds of butterflies, all nestling on the walls."